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Reading Lamia for the first time here, thank you for the introduction. And struck mostly by how young the author sounds! I mean even if you didn’t know who was writing, I think the mash-ups, the breathless drama, the euphemisms and yep, ‘blushing’ give a strong impression of a heightened sexuality that I associate with youth. Interested to see where this goes. Was not expecting Lamia to be a quelling presence, so that’s intriguing given the lusty opening…

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I’d read several of the famous Keats poems and really enjoyed them but didn’t know where to go next (and was slightly put off by Endymion bar the nice extract they had for a while on the Tube). I didn’t know Lamia and loved this first post!

This phrase in particular stood out:

“There as he stood, he heard a mournful voice,

Such as once heard, in gentle heart, destroys

All pain but pity”

This last “destroys all pain but pity” feels like such an improvement on just “creates such pity” (or more likely “begets/instills/imbues such pity”) in giving a specific description of the movement of emotion, similar to the detail you’d expect in describing some physical change. A lot of what I enjoy in Keats might be this moody but precise description of emotion (Ode to a Nightingale being pretty much wall-to-wall this). It also feels very Shakespearean to me, though I can’t think of an example and that might just be vibes haha.

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